Woulvun's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Warm and cozy]

This looks so cozy, and the Christmas tree looks nice. Although, straightening out the lines in the background could make this even better. I like the decorations you've chosen for the background, they're very pretty.

Demonhero101 responds:

Thank you I'm still working on keeping my lines straight and even.

[Jotaro Kujo]

This is amazing! You chose a really cool angle for the light, and I like how much detail this has.

PkBlitz responds:

Thank you!! I did a lot of trial and error with the three sources of light

[Ice man]

Nice clean lines and solid colors. I like the little pattern in the background, it works well with the solid color on the character. Nice work on the pose, but the lighting on the character looks odd. The direction of the light source is unclear.

[twittser sketch 2-14, Zeelo]

Everything in this just screams wild excitement. You did a great job portraying that in the lines and the pose. I like the way you did the shading, it's cool. The only thing throwing me off is what's happening in his mouth and behind his shoulder, and I can't tell what it is. Overall, you did great work.

bimshwel responds:

thank you! as a "sketch" it is not meant to look TOO complete. I initially drew it months ago and wanted to touch it up some more last week, and indeed, I wasn't totally sure what was going on in every part of the image. it seemed like I had drawn two ends to the tail, or maybe it was part of the creature's unorthodox scarf. And mouths I have never been good at! Generally I can get by through not drawing too much attention to them, but the unusual lighting may have inadvertently highlighted what I would ordinarily hide in darkness.

[Girl power]

I like the choice of colors you used for the background. You should work on drawing faces, her chin looks a little uneven. The line work and coloring also need to be cleaned up. Try to fill in those white spaces in the hair and it can look better. If the lines around the edges of the body were a little thicker it would work better with the background. I think the drawing is still cute though, keep going! I'm sure you can improve!

SarahRBC responds:

Thank you! I will try my best at the next one.

[stinkenbottom]

This is a good drawing. Clean lines, good coloring and shadows. There is one thing that's off, the hand at the top looks like the thumb is on the wrong side.

NotaBeethescribbler responds:

Y'know what, I never even noticed until you pointed it out. I'm impressed. Hands can be a pain to draw, sometimes. I'm sure I'm not the only one to have said that. Anyway, Thank you.

[Stay clean and safe.]

This is a nice drawing, but the lines are shaky. I think if you had smoother lines it could be a lot better. I also think adding some shading could help too.

AquaBlock68 responds:

Yeah, sorry about the lines, I kinda have trouble drawing on my computer and I need to learn how to add shading on my art. Thank you for your criticism.

[Links The Legend of Zelda (Fanart)]

The facial expression and his eyes are great. I really like this, but there are some things that could be improved on. There some places where the colors go outside the lines, it would look much better if you cleaned that up. I really like what you did with the clothes but the parts that are extremely highlighted with the scribbles/lines don't really match with how fabric looks when light is shined on it.

EliasGZ responds:

thanks for the suggestion, I will try to improve the projection of the light in my drawings and I will try to make it look cleaner :)

[Peachy Mango]

This is great, it looks so real! The only things that I see that need a little work are the ears and eyebrows. The eyebrows don't look completed, they just look like flat brush strokes instead of a collection of small hairs. The inside of the ear doesn't look like it has enough depth to it, it looks a little flat.